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#1 Lori

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Posted 14 September 2011 - 03:25 AM

My lovely new stainless steel oil can, I was prompted to write it a poem..

In my kitchen stands chromium lustre
forged into a conical wonder
Surrounds captured in reflected silver ray distortion
Like Terminator 2 poly-alloy man in motion
stabilized,
so I'm not terrified
Just mesmerized in stainless steel metal love






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#2 Yarxy

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Posted 14 September 2011 - 01:27 PM

Now you just need to set it to music.

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#3 bflood

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Posted 15 September 2011 - 06:55 AM

I would get Wilco to be the backing band in the studio.  :)

#4 Lori

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Posted 17 September 2011 - 04:40 AM

View Postthorn plucker, on 16 September 2011 - 07:21 AM, said:

now that you can can, you must post pic of lovely new stainless steel oil can alongside poem.

Yes I can.:)
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